blog # 2

i would say that my strengths were giving details, show and not tell. i like to be specific and explain how everything happens. my weaknesses i would say were how to jump from one subject to anotheri believe i wasn't using enough transitional words. another big weakness that i notice in my writing would be ron- on sentences. i don't really know when to put a comma, or a period or even how to complete an idea. if i would it have the chance to do something different would be putting more effort and taking steps like brainstorming or making an outline which i think it would it made my work easier. i did enjoy writing it because i love to tell my story how i got here and the trouble that took me to learned english , and how everything changed for me. it was a subject that interested me, so i think if you like something you would enjoy doing it.